Author Feedback
Kind words from the writers I’ve worked with
Lindsey's editorial work displays meticulous attention to detail, from grammar and sentence structure to plot and character presentation.
Beyond the technicals, though, she exhibits a keen sense for the flow of a story and great instincts for what readers value most.
G.S. Jennsen
Bestselling author of over 20 sci-fi novels
I had an excellent working relationship with Lindsey. Her reading of my manuscript was extremely thorough and her editorial letter comprehensive. The in-margin comments I received not only pointed out weak areas in the structure, pacing, or character development of the novel, but also included suggestions on how to solve those problems.
The post-edit meeting was especially helpful to discuss the ideas I had come up with to fix some of these weak areas. Lindsey was quick to respond to questions and willing to take the time to make sure my novel was as strong as possible.
I would enthusiastically recommend her to any fantasy author looking to improve their writing.
J.G. Gardner
Fantasy / Developmental Edit
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Lindsey has been marvelous. I hired her a year ago for a developmental edit on a fairly rough draft because of her expertise in genetics and alternative fiction.
On the exact day she specified, she sent me an encouraging, comprehensive document along with notes in the margins that covered many things, not just one focus. We scheduled a follow-up call, which was the icing on the cake. She encouraged me in my fictional goals and creativity in ways to help me improve.
Among other things, she gave me the tools to transform my dialogue and to actually understand the art of writing showing versus telling. There may be a place for AI tools, but there is nothing like a human editor to help us write for people.
It’s not an exaggeration to say her work is superlative.
Karin K.
Dystopian / Developmental Edit
Lindsey left no stone unturned, and her editorial letter was a masterclass in writing, beats, character development, and much more
Lindsey has a keen eye for what builds a story to last. She could pinpoint the loadbearing structures of my story and knew exactly what material I needed to reinforce it.
I felt that every piece of feedback was designed to empower the themes and characters of the story, and her analysis was detailed and thoughtful.
I trust her to take my story to the next level!
Surya Loring
Space Adventure / Developmental Edit
She could pinpoint the loadbearing structures of my story
As a first-time writer I engaged Lindsey to help me with a developmental edit after interviewing several editors. I am very impressed with Lindsey’s deliverables, an editorial letter and the marked up manuscript.
One can tell that she cares about her work and brings passion to the table.
Her efforts are helping me to deliver a deeper and more engaging text, without getting in the way of my goals for the book. She meets her schedule and is professional in her handling of her business.
I now consider Lindsey an important asset to help me with my writing endeavors.
David Gloski
Literary Speculative Fiction / Developmental Edit, Manuscript Evaluation, Line Edit
Her efforts are helping me to deliver a deeper and more engaging text, without getting in the way of my goals for the book.
Working with Lindsey has been a dream come true! I hired her for her Developmental and Line Edit package. After reviewing the developmental edit, we also moved forward with a coaching session.
Lindsey is professional, passionate, and knowledgeable about her craft. She’s also fun to talk to! She doesn’t stop at providing a service; she aims to educate writers and elevate the projects she works on. I can say with full confidence that she helped me achieve that by leaps and bounds.
I came to her as an inexperienced writer, and Lindsey helped me feel like a real author. She listened to my goals and helped me turn them into reality. My work and confidence have forever been positively impacted by our working relationship, and I’m incredibly grateful for that.
I would highly recommend her to anyone writing fantasy and sci-fi, especially those who are looking to level up their work.
Kelli E. Cox
Fantasy / Developmental Edit, Coaching, Line Edit
Lindsey helped me feel like a real author
Years ago, I learned that editing can be daunting because your manuscript will be returned with a lot of red ink, but working with Star Scatter Publishing wasn't daunting at all!
The comments were really helpful for improving both my debut book and my writing ability itself.
The process was never overwhelming, especially because I received information on my strengths as as well as my weaknesses.
It also never felt like the editor was trying to change my story into their story, which is very important to me. Overall, I had a great experience and would love to work with this editor again!
J.M. Cooke
Romantic Fantasy, Line Edit
It never felt like the editor was trying to change my story into their story
Shortly after my novel got accepted, imposter-syndrome started replacing my confidence with self-doubt, as it so often does. Lindsey's editorial letter couldn’t have come at a better time, and although I had felt overwhelmed initially, my outlook completely changed during the second read-through. Some feedback can be tough to hear after spending months on a manuscript, and yet it was because I had spent months writing it I felt it deserved to be better than it was.
Alongside the editorial letter, Lindsey highlighted many areas of my manuscript that also needed revision, making it feel like she was holding my hand during the process. Not only that, as I was revising my manuscript, I noticed my confidence returning, and unlike before, it has stayed with me.
Lindsey left no stone unturned, and her editorial letter was a masterclass in writing, beats, character development, and much more, making it invaluable for my future projects.
Kelly Barker
Romantasy / Developmental Edit
It never felt like the editor was trying to change my story into their story
Amazing! Delivered before the date, insightful comments, wonderful feedback and masterful editing!
Jena Ells
Literary Speculative Fiction / Beta Read, Line Edit, Copy Edit
For any writers approaching professional editing for the first time, I understand firsthand how intimidating and overwhelming the experience can be. In the best possible way, Lindsey completely shattered my expectations of what working with an editor could look like.
Lindsey took a significant amount of time to discuss my concerns and was incredibly thoughtful and attentive when answering all of my questions. She took my story seriously. She was curious about my characters, asked questions about my lore and world, and I know without a doubt that she genuinely wanted to help me make it better.
Perhaps you believe no one will love or believe in your story the way you do. But Lindsey does.
Eliza Farron
Debut Author, Following Initial Consult
Lindsey completely shattered my expectations of what working with an editor could look like.

